Council Communication
This skill should be used when the user needs to draft or understand official municipal communications including staff reports, council memos, resolutions, ordinances, or constituent correspondence. Triggers include any mention of staff reports, memos, resolutions, proclamations, constituent letters, or official communications.
Council Communication
Overview
Effective communication is essential for municipal governance. Different document types serve different purposes and follow established conventions. Understanding these conventions ensures clarity, professionalism, and legal compliance.
Staff Reports
Purpose
Staff reports provide council members with the information needed to make informed decisions. They should be comprehensive yet concise, objective yet include recommendations. The standard structure follows a three-part pattern: Background → Analysis → Recommendation.
Optimal length: Research (Johnson & Lyles, 2016, Journal of the American Planning Association) found 6-10 pages optimal — reports of 5 pages or fewer scored poorly on completeness, while reports over 10 pages showed no improvement in quality.
Audience-appropriate communication: GFOA advises tailoring financial communication to different stakeholders — elected officials need strategic priorities and accountability mechanisms; the public needs simplified presentations using relatable scales (cost per household, cost per person). Avoid overwhelming elected officials with line-item detail meant for management.
Standard Format
STAFF REPORT
TO: Mayor and City Council
FROM: [Department Director Name], [Title]
DATE: [Meeting Date]
SUBJECT: [Clear, Specific Subject Line]
RECOMMENDATION
[Clear statement of requested action, suitable for motion]
SUMMARY
[2-3 paragraph overview of the issue and recommendation]
BACKGROUND
[Context, history, how we got here]
ANALYSIS
[Detailed examination of the issue]
[Options considered]
[Pros and cons]
FISCAL IMPACT
[Costs, funding source, budget implications]
ALTERNATIVES
[Other options council could consider]
ATTACHMENTS
[List of supporting documents]
Writing Best Practices
Recommendation Section:
- Lead with the ask
- Make it motion-ready
- Be specific about the action
- Include ordinance/resolution numbers
Summary Section:
- Assume reader reads only this
- Cover the essential what, why, how
- Keep to 3-4 paragraphs maximum
Analysis Section:
- Present facts objectively
- Acknowledge counterarguments
- Support conclusions with evidence
- Be transparent about uncertainty
Fiscal Impact:
- Be specific about costs
- Identify funding source
- Note ongoing vs. one-time
- Include indirect costs
Ordinances
What is an Ordinance?
A local law of general and permanent application. Ordinances remain in effect until amended or repealed.
Standard Ordinance Format
ORDINANCE NO. [YEAR]-[NUMBER]
AN ORDINANCE [BRIEF TITLE DESCRIBING PURPOSE]
WHEREAS, [recital of facts and findings]; and
WHEREAS, [additional recitals]; and
WHEREAS, [authority for action];
NOW, THEREFORE, BE IT ORDAINED BY THE [CITY COUNCIL/BOARD]
OF THE [CITY/VILLAGE] OF [NAME], [STATE]:
SECTION 1. [Findings incorporated or stated]
SECTION 2. [Substantive provisions - what the law requires]
SECTION 3. [Additional substantive provisions]
SECTION 4. [Severability clause]
SECTION 5. [Effective date]
PASSED by the [City Council] this ___ day of _______, 20__.
APPROVED:
_______________________
[Mayor Name], Mayor
ATTEST:
_______________________
[Clerk Name], City Clerk
Ordinance Drafting Tips
- Each section should address one concept
- Use "shall" for mandatory requirements
- Use "may" for permissive authority
- Define terms consistently
- Cross-reference related code sections
- Include severability clause
- Specify effective date
Resolutions
What is a Resolution?
A formal expression of opinion, intention, or decision that typically addresses a specific situation rather than establishing ongoing policy.
Common Uses
- Approving contracts
- Setting fees
- Policy statements
- Recognitions/commendations
- Grant applications
- Temporary regulations
- Procedural matters
Standard Resolution Format
RESOLUTION NO. [YEAR]-[NUMBER]
A RESOLUTION [BRIEF TITLE]
WHEREAS, [background and justification]; and
WHEREAS, [additional recitals]; and
WHEREAS, [authority or purpose];
NOW, THEREFORE, BE IT RESOLVED BY THE [CITY COUNCIL/BOARD]
OF THE [CITY/VILLAGE] OF [NAME], [STATE]:
SECTION 1. [Statement of action or position]
SECTION 2. [Additional provisions if needed]
SECTION 3. This Resolution shall be effective [immediately/upon adoption].
PASSED AND ADOPTED this ___ day of _______, 20__.
_______________________
[Mayor Name], Mayor
ATTEST:
_______________________
[Clerk Name], City Clerk
Proclamations
Purpose
Ceremonial documents recognizing events, individuals, or causes. No legal effect but significant symbolic value.
Standard Format
PROCLAMATION
WHEREAS, [background about the subject]; and
WHEREAS, [significance or achievements]; and
WHEREAS, [connection to the community]; and
WHEREAS, [additional relevant facts];
NOW, THEREFORE, I, [Mayor Name], Mayor of the [City/Village] of
[Name], do hereby proclaim [Date/Week/Month] as
[NAME OF PROCLAMATION]
in the [City/Village] of [Name] and urge all residents to
[appropriate call to action].
IN WITNESS WHEREOF, I have hereunto set my hand and caused the
Seal of the [City/Village] of [Name] to be affixed this ___ day
of _______, 20__.
_______________________
[Mayor Name], Mayor
Council Memos
Purpose
Less formal than staff reports, used for updates, FYI items, or matters not requiring action.
Format
MEMORANDUM
TO: Mayor and City Council
FROM: [Name], [Title]
DATE: [Date]
RE: [Subject]
[Body of memo - more conversational than staff report]
[Can include bullet points for readability]
[Should still be professional and complete]
[Optional: "Please contact me if you have questions."]
Constituent Correspondence
Response Principles
- Acknowledge promptly
- Be respectful regardless of tone received
- Provide substantive response
- Explain "why" not just "what"
- Offer next steps when appropriate
- Follow up on commitments
Standard Elements
Acknowledgment:
Thank you for contacting us about [issue]. We appreciate you taking the time to share your concerns.
Response to Concern:
[Substantive response addressing their specific points] [Explanation of policy/situation] [What, if anything, can be done]
Next Steps:
[What will happen next] [How they can stay informed] [Who to contact for follow-up]
Closing:
Thank you again for your engagement in local government. [We value your input / Please don't hesitate to reach out with additional questions.]
Tone Guidelines
- Professional but warm
- Avoid bureaucratic jargon
- Explain acronyms
- Be honest about limitations
- Never be defensive
- Acknowledge frustration without validating inappropriate behavior
Email Best Practices
- Clear subject line
- Lead with the answer
- Short paragraphs
- Respond within 48 hours
- Copy appropriate staff
- BCC for mass communications
Minutes
Purpose
Official record of meeting proceedings. Legal document that memorializes actions taken.
Types
- Action Minutes: Brief record of actions taken (most common)
- Summary Minutes: More detail on discussion
- Verbatim Minutes: Word-for-word transcript
Standard Elements
- Date, time, place
- Members present/absent
- Items discussed
- Motions (exact language of each motion)
- Vote tallies (yeas, nays, abstentions by name)
- Public comments (summary or verbatim, per local rules)
- Time of adjournment
- Clerk signature
Level of Detail
- Action minutes: Record only motions, votes, and outcomes — most efficient, most common
- Summary minutes: Include key discussion points and rationale in addition to actions — useful for complex or controversial items
- Verbatim transcript: Word-for-word record of all proceedings — sometimes required for quasi-judicial hearings; labor-intensive
Draft vs. Approved Minutes
- Minutes are considered draft until formally approved by a vote at a subsequent meeting
- Members review draft minutes before approval and may propose corrections
- Contested minutes: If a member disagrees with the draft, they propose specific corrections during the approval item; the body votes on each correction
- Once approved, minutes become the official record; they should not be altered except through a formal motion to amend previously approved minutes
Closed Session Minutes
- Separate set of minutes kept for executive/closed sessions
- Access is restricted; typically reviewed periodically for possible public release
- Release timing varies by state Open Meetings Act — check
municipal.local.mdfor local rules
Retention
- Minutes are typically permanent records under state records retention schedules
- Both draft and approved versions may need to be retained, depending on jurisdiction
- Audio/video recordings may have separate (shorter) retention requirements
Best Practices
- Record what happened, not opinions
- Use consistent format
- Note abstentions and recusals
- Reference attachment numbers
- Avoid editorializing
- Circulate draft for review
Using Connected Tools
- When connected tools are unavailable, work from uploaded documents and examples
Planned connectors (not yet available — plugin works without these):
document-management— templates and past examplesagenda-management— ordinance/resolution trackingcommunication— internal coordination
Municipal Configuration
Check municipal.local.md for:
- Governing body title
- Official document format preferences
- Key contacts
- Procedural requirements
Amendment and Redline Conventions
When presenting amendments to ordinances, resolutions, or other municipal documents, follow these conventions for clarity.
Markup Standards
- Strikethrough for deletions, underline for additions — this is the most common municipal convention
- Present both a redline version (showing all changes) and a clean version (showing the final text) for council review
- Color coding is optional but helpful: red for deletions, blue for additions
Section Renumbering
- When sections are added or removed, note explicitly whether remaining sections are renumbered
- If renumbered, include a table or note mapping old section numbers to new ones
- Some jurisdictions prefer to reserve the deleted section number (e.g., "Section 4. [Reserved]") to avoid renumbering
Standard Clauses
- Effective date clause: State when the amendment takes effect — upon adoption, upon publication, or a specified future date
- Severability clause: Standard provision that if any section is held invalid by a court, the remaining sections remain in full force and effect
- Include both in every amending ordinance
Codification
- After adoption, amendments are incorporated into the municipal code by the codification service (e.g., Municode, American Legal, General Code)
- The codification service updates the official code, applies section renumbering, and updates cross-references
- Allow lead time for codification — the official code may not reflect recent amendments immediately
Ordinance vs. Resolution Decision Framework
Choosing the wrong instrument creates legal confusion and may require corrective action. Use this framework:
| Factor | Ordinance | Resolution |
|---|---|---|
| Nature | Law of general application | Expression of policy, opinion, or specific action |
| Duration | Permanent until amended or repealed | Typically for a specific instance or time period |
| Codification | Codified in the municipal code | Filed but not codified |
| Adoption requirements | May require multiple readings, public hearing, publication | Usually adopted in a single meeting |
| Amendment | Requires an amending ordinance | May be superseded by a later resolution |
| Examples | Zoning regulations, tax levies, business licensing | Contract approvals, fee schedules, honorary designations, grant applications |
Decision Rule
- Does this create, amend, or repeal a rule of general application? → Ordinance
- Does this approve a specific action, express a position, or set a fee? → Resolution
- When in doubt: Check state law and local practice. Some states require ordinances for specific actions (e.g., appropriations, tax levies).
Common Mistakes
- Using a resolution for something that should be an ordinance (e.g., creating a new regulation). The resolution is likely unenforceable.
- Using an ordinance for a one-time action (e.g., approving a specific contract). Overkill and creates unnecessary codification burden.
- Fee schedules: Practice varies. Some municipalities adopt fee schedules by ordinance (ensures full public hearing process); others adopt by resolution (allows faster updates). Check your local convention.
Legal Drafting Standards
Precision of Mandatory/Permissive Language
| Word | Meaning | Use When |
|---|---|---|
| Shall | Mandatory — creates an obligation or prohibition | Imposing a duty: "The applicant shall submit..." |
| Must | Mandatory — equivalent to "shall" in modern drafting | Interchangeable with "shall"; some modern style guides prefer "must" |
| May | Permissive — grants authority or discretion | Granting authority: "The director may grant an extension..." |
| Should | Advisory — not enforceable | Avoid in ordinances; appropriate in plans and policy documents |
| Will | Future tense — describes what will happen | Avoid in operative provisions; use in recitals or explanatory text |
Rule: In operative sections, use only "shall" (or "must") and "may." If you're not sure whether a provision is mandatory or permissive, it probably needs to be rewritten for clarity.
Structural Rules
- One concept per section: Each section should address a single requirement or grant of authority
- Definitions before use: Define terms before using them, or in a separate definitions section referenced early
- General before specific: Place general rules before exceptions and special cases
- Active voice: "The applicant shall submit" (not "An application shall be submitted by the applicant")
- Present tense: "A violation is a misdemeanor" (not "A violation shall be a misdemeanor")
Common Drafting Errors
| Error | Example | Fix |
|---|---|---|
| Ambiguous "and/or" | "The fee shall include permit and/or inspection costs" | Choose "and" or "or"; if both are possible, write it out: "permit costs, inspection costs, or both" |
| Dangling reference | "As provided in Section 5" when Section 5 doesn't exist yet | Verify all cross-references before adoption |
| Inconsistent terms | "Applicant" in Section 1, "petitioner" in Section 3, same meaning | Pick one term, define it, use it consistently |
| Shall + passive | "Notice shall be given" | "The clerk shall give notice" — identify who has the duty |
| Missing enforcement | Creates a prohibition but no penalty or enforcement mechanism | Add: "A violation of this section is subject to [penalty]" |
Constituent Triage Protocol
Not all constituent contacts require the same response speed or handling. Use this 3-tier routing system:
Tier 1: Immediate (respond within 4 hours)
| Indicator | Examples | Route To |
|---|---|---|
| Public safety threat | "There's a sinkhole in the road," "Street light arcing" | 911 or non-emergency police/fire dispatch; notify public works |
| Utility emergency | "No water," "Sewer backup into home" | Utility on-call; notify public works director |
| Imminent legal deadline | "FOIA appeal deadline is tomorrow" | Municipal attorney + FOIA officer |
| Media inquiry before deadline | "Reporter needs comment by 3pm" | City manager / communications officer |
Tier 2: Priority (respond within 24 hours)
| Indicator | Examples | Route To |
|---|---|---|
| Code complaint affecting quality of life | "Neighbor's property is a health hazard" | Code enforcement with courtesy acknowledgment to constituent |
| Service delivery failure | "Trash wasn't picked up," "Pothole on Main St" | Public works with tracking number to constituent |
| Meeting-related | "I want to speak at Wednesday's meeting" | Clerk's office + confirm public comment procedures |
| Elected official request | Fellow council member asks for information | Relevant department head, CC city manager |
Tier 3: Standard (respond within 48 hours)
| Indicator | Examples | Route To |
|---|---|---|
| General inquiry | "What are the rules for building a fence?" | Relevant department with informational response |
| Policy opinion | "The city should do more about [issue]" | Acknowledge and log; share with council if pattern emerges |
| Compliment or thank-you | "Great job on the park renovation" | Forward to relevant department; add to council report |
| Request for meeting | "Can I meet with the mayor about...?" | Schedule per mayor's availability and protocol |
Red Flags for Escalation
Regardless of tier, escalate immediately to the city manager and/or municipal attorney if the communication:
- Contains a threat (to persons, property, or legal action)
- References pending litigation or an attorney
- Involves a discrimination complaint or civil rights allegation
- Comes from a regulatory agency (EPA, state AG, OSHA, etc.)
- Involves an elected official's potential conflict of interest
Related Skills
parliamentary-procedure— motion-ready language, amendment procedures, and voting requirementsopen-meetings-foia— minutes requirements, public notice content, and open meetings compliancemunicipal-code-analysis— code amendment drafting, cross-referencing, and codification standards
Document Checklist
Before submitting any official document:
- Correct format used
- All blanks filled in
- Numbers verified
- Dates correct
- Names spelled correctly
- Legal review (if required)
- Attachments referenced and included
- Recommendation is clear and actionable
- Fiscal impact stated
- Timeline realistic
- Plain language used
- Proofread for errors